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Saturday, September 4, 2010

Nothing Is Ever Really Perfect *INTRODUCTION*

How do you really begin a story? Do we start off by saying "Once upon a time..." , or what? Hmm.. how about I just introduce the characters and we'll be on our way.

I'm going to tell you about a charming couple, Haifa and 3ali. It really was love at first sight for these two. They met one summer in California and instantly hit it off. They got married a year after they met and not too long after they had a daughter. A beautiful baby named Jenna.

Jenna was the perfect little angel. Got all high marks and got accepted to all the amazing Universities including Harvard and Yale. In the end her heart and mind was set on Studying law at Harvard. But when she got back home, she realized her true passion was art. So she attended the London School of Art for a year. Once back home she opened up a little art gallery which luckily for her took off right away.

On a night of one of her exhibitions, Jenna met 3bdullah. He was a businessman looking into buying a painting for his new house. Jenna tried avoiding him all night being so shy and all but 3bdullah eventually caught up to her and asked her out to dinner. And from that dinner came many more, until one night he proposed to her and gave her the dream wedding she's always wanted.

Now at 25, Jenna and 3bdullah are still madly in love trying to conceive a child.



Two years after Jenna was born, Yasmeen came along. She was the most moody one. The one that was always hard to please. But non the less, everyone adored her. After graduating college she decided to move to America. But her parents refused since nothing was waiting for her all the way on the other side of the globe. Yasmeen never fell in love, not once. Many eligible men came asking for her hand after hearing many wonderful things about her, but she rejected each and every one of those men. Not even one of them seemed like Mr. Perfect.

Haifa, her mother was devastated. She always prayed to God that someone would come and sweep her off her feet.

So one day a handsome man named 3bdul3ziz came wanting Yasmeen's hand in marriage. His mother had told him about Yasmeen and he figured "Hey why not? It's about time I settled down anyways". He felt an immediate attraction towards her. The only problem was that Yasmeen felt nothing at all. It was as if she was numb inside. But seeing how devastated her mother got every time she turned down a man, she couldn't bare doing that to her again. So this time she accepted the proposal. Yasmeen and 3bdl3ziz were married a year later. God only knows of she's living in misery or in bliss.



The youngest of them was Dalia. She was the most fun to be around. She had this vibrant energy whenever she walked into a room. At 21, she had just finished college and has no plans into going after her masters. One of her many talents was writing. So she started her very own blog and was constantly on it 24/7. No one knew about it other than her mom. She knew everybody else would think it's silly and pointless. Sure she's had crushes on guys but never actually thought any of them were worth going after. As she always says, "Someday he'll come, and here I'll wait patiently". She was known as the hopeless romantic daughter. Standing next to Yasmeen who was the unknown, because nobody ever knew what went inside that little head of hers. And then there was Jenna, known as the one. The one everybody went to for advice, anything you could think of Jenna was always the one to go to.


Jenna.. 25

Yasmeen.. 23

Dalia.. 21



Sure they had their mini fights and feuds but at the end of the day they were so close that not even an earthquake could tear them apart. Those three were the best of friends. Many envied how close they were, given that these days many sisters fight each other rather than fight along side one another.


This family has had lots of ups and downs and managed to still pull through with each hand holding onto another.

Everything seems perfect right?

But soon they'll all realize that nothing is every really perfect.

And some may already have that fact written down.







So what do you guys think? I'm gonna need alot of help on this one guys. Full on support to keep assuring me that I'm at my best. Aham shay y3jbkm. I've thought really hard on this story and have it all planned out so gt ready.
And in order for me to post the next one, I'm gonna need atleast 10 comments :$
And please from now on without me asking, comment :(
Even if your a silent reader, atleast just give me a thumbs up.
I love you all !

19 comments:

Anonymous said...

AMAZING!!! PLS PLS NEXT POST!!!

Anonymous said...

Continue please ! im hooked alreay!!

Anonymous said...

I wanna know more;O yalla continue;p

xoxo
S;*

Anonymous said...

(y)

Anonymous said...

Continue please :P

Anonymous said...

im liking el idea :D do continue plz (A) and i am a verryy silent reader hehe bas i love kil your stories <3 good luck on this one ow alla ye7fa'6ch :D


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HRM <3

Diva;* said...

I LOVE IT! it's true i never comment but im gonna start commenting! please continue :D

Anonymous said...

i loveee ittt , keeep on goingg ;**

-Danah

Anonymous said...

im hooked o.o i really love it ;p please keep goinggg :D




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Cashmere said...

I guess that makes me number ten xD.
I love the start, I REALLY want to know what's happening next.
Post soon ;D

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caramela said...

Suzyyy ;**
ok let me tell u something maglta lich ;$$
i read ur first story gabl a year bilthab6 ;p
o the second one i copy past it o i saved it bil lap o lail7en magraitha ;/
o the third one magraitha ;(
o i liked this one waaayd 3jbtniii :D
so inshalla im gana read 2day the tgird story then the second ok ??
O sorry tawni i comment ;**

loove u girl ;***

caramela said...

Sorry tkhrba6t !!
Athare i read the first two ;$
o high skool i saved it !
O now babalish the other man o ili waraha ;$
mashalla athare u wrote alot laish tawni ala7th !!
Tara ildashboard maynzl everything u post !!

Anonymous said...

*thumbs up* ;)

F;* said...

AMAAAZING! cant wait !

Blue lilies;* said...

i am already loving this!
seems real! because nothing IS really perfect!
but at the same time a7is this story is different!
cant waittt! xx

FooFii said...

am loving it <3 ..
please do continue posting
i love these kind of stories ;***

shallweshall said...

i basically love anything you write ;* youre an amazing writer and an inspiration to many. thank you so much

Anonymous said...

(Y) nice begining so far ;)