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Monday, November 16, 2009

Hitting The Real World .. 44 ((FINAL))


After a long roller coaster ride, they were finaly engaged. As planned, the wedding would be in a year.

You would think everyone would jump up and down with joy, but no. All they had to say was "finaly.. now what do we have planned for today". It's like they've all seen it coming.


As for Naif, well he still kept on bringing up marriage every chance he got but would get rejected everytime. He tried everything with 3alya.. charm.. seduction.. agressivenss.. but nothing.
Until one day he got fed up and talked to 3alya's parents. Her parents were thrilled !

And she said yes !

7amad and Sabia were moving slowly. They didn't wanna rush things. Plus Sabia didnt fully trust him. I mean he has a past of playing around with girls, so she kept her distance.

But after six months of putting him to the test, she finaly gave in and decided to share her full self with him.

7amad changed aswell. He for the second time in a long time... he gave another girl his heart.

A few years back he was madly in love with his girlfreind of four years. But she started becoming distant. Whenever 7amad would try to call her she would appear busy, and then later make up some excuse. He was too blinded my love to see the signs.

7amad had a best friend, Rashed.

Whenever 7amad couldn't be there to pick or drop her off, with him being too jammed with school, Rashed would offer to do it.

At first it was normal. But soon become an on going thing. Sometimes Rashed would insist on him to keep studying and he would pick up his girl friend, not to worry. And there were also times when his girl friend would also insist on him studying and have Rashed pick her up.

They were dancing around 7amad, and he didnt even know it.

He was stupid in love.

And when he found out.. it just tore him to peices. It broke his heart. He ended it and moved back home. He couldnt stand being in the same city as her, let alone the same state (USA)

Thats when he put in his mind that all women were whores and have no respect for men.

Thats when he played on girls, using his charm to reel em' in then once he got what he wanted, he would get rid of them.

Thats when he shut down his heart and didnt care who he hurt.

Thats when he became the ultimate bad boy.

Its strange, how one love can take you to the extreme.



But in Sabia's eyes, he saw something, something that captured him. Sure, from the moment he saw her, he wanted nothing more than to get "close", but when he sat down and actualy talked and got to know her... it all changed from there.

He was hooked. Her spirit was amazing that it lifted him up. In just two hours being out with eachother, she managed to make him laugh and smile.. two things he hadn't felt in a really long time.

Once he knew that a girl could make him feel this way, he knew, he just knew that he had to have Sabia.

Just his luck, she didnt run away.


As for Noura and S3oud... well nothing much changed. There still in love as they'll ever be. ((sorry bs i think alot of attention has pretty much shined on them already ;p))



A year later 5aled and Dina were married. And yes she got her dream wedding in paris, the one she's always been dreaming of.

It was in this big gorgous ball room where you could the eifel tower. It was so romantic.

She wore a white sleevless heart chested dress. Her hair was up in a classy curled up bun, with tiny strands of curls let down on her face. She looked so beautiful, so elegant, so perfect.

It was actyaly kinda of funny too.. the wedding was taking place in paris.... and when the men walked in in their traditional clothes everyone just bursted out laughing. It so did not go with the setting.

At one point Dina was about to ask for them all to go back and change into jeans and a sweatshirt, mn kither ma heya msye7ya !

They were married and lived in paris for a year.

When they both moved back home, 5aled got a job in a law firm ... something he never saw in his future. While Dina opened up a small restuarant, ofcourse with her parents help. It was italian, in which she named it after herself, Dina.

As is obviouse.. Dina is an italian name (A) hehe walla mani 83da ashoof 7ali al7een l2nah ismi ana ba3ad Dina ;p

Naif and 3alya were still engaged, but she wanted to get married after her third year. Meaning Naif would have to go through hell in waiting another year and a half. But to him, she was even worth dying for.

Now your all probably wondering what happend to Mona and 3bdulah right ?

Well Mona remained a bitch and managed to sleep with half the men of New york. Sorry, let me clear... half the New Yorkers AND Arabs there.

She and 3bdulah never saw eachother after what had happend, nor did they try to contact eachother.

He now lives in Manchester with his cousin.




This is where we say goodbye to our characters who've had one hell of a bumpy ride.

Now another chapter closes and soon a new book will begin.

I really hoped you all enjoyed this story. I dunno why but I feel like it wasnt my best. For me I really wish to continue "Trapped" since it was my favorite story writing, but what is there to continue really?

So I would like FEEDBACKS on this story, how was it ? Be honest please...




Now, as for my next story, I've decided to let myself out, and let you all in.

I'll be starting it soon inshallah.. either tommorow or the day after for sure.

It will be about me and what I've been through and where I am now.

I'm not really afraid of judgment, mn Rabi 6b3an, but from people no. I used to be a long time ago. But ive come to realize to screw the ones who judge and love the ones that are on my side.

I'll be honest and speak nothing but the truth, this is my story and I'll tell it like it is.

And since this is "me" not some made up story, I WILL be expecting to hear from all of you.

I love you all and thank you so much for your support on my third story :)

My followers.. thank you all so much. You've been amazing !

14 comments:

Be Your Passion said...

FIRSTTT!!!!!
Walaah el 3athem enich Amazing..!!!
I just LOVED everything in this post !! The Ending..Your new story KLSHAY!!
6ool ma ana agraah w il ebtesama shagah wayhe :D!
W I can't wait to read the new story ;*
Love u :*

Bella_x0x0 said...

awww
honestly.. I loved this story..alot.. like.. i used to check it out 2-3 times a day to see if u posted a new chapter or not. I loved it alot..and I loved the characters..and the ending was really really sweet!!!..the whole 5aled and Dina thing *sweettt*... um.. n abt ur previous story trapped.. hmmm
well.. i read it sometime before..and it was gud.. but.. there were times where i was like.. god.. wen will he stop beating her up.. in short, it was very depressing.. but it had a nice plot tho.. however..there's no use of making a 2nd one anyways..
ahaa.. going on to ur story :P you have no idea how much im excited to read ur next story *n a true one too!!! n abt you!!! even better!!!* !! at last we'll get to know more about our lovely writer.. seriusly girl.. ur one of my fav writers online..and no matter wat u write.. i'll always like it.. and abt the judement thing.. yes.. u shudnt be afraid of tht.. cuz only god can! we love youuuu!!!
Xoxo

FooFii said...

Mashalla ,, your style in writing attracted all of us to read it , <3 you are really talented and i would love to buy your book one day in the near future and read it <3 ..

Anonymous said...

AMAAZZZZINNNG!!! BEST STORY I EVER READ!! Hope ur new one will be amazing(inshalla)
xoxo,
d.s

Rawan said...

i loved this story oo i'd love to hear yours:P

Anonymous said...

love the final<3 cant wait for ur story ill comment always!!!

Anonymous said...

LOOOL aham shay the dina being an italian name part!!
Loved the finale and love all of them especially khaled!<3
I'll be reading your new story too!
Lat6awleen 3laina 3ad ;*

-Freckles xx

Anonymous said...

9ara7tan i love love love love it to the infiniti maX!!


nothing could've been better

7yate amAZING!!<3<3


w can't wait for the you story

am writing about me too n i hid nothing n nothing


n yes don't be afraid to show who you real are cause i have a feeling enna your adorable n nice n kell shay<3

thanks wayeed for the story<3

-the lost one

Nawarii said...

whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy did this story have to come to an end :( im so saddddddddddddd... bas im so glad things turned out to be happy and i think everyone got what they deserved bas wallah ill miss this story i loved it a lot ms.drama queen and i truly will miss its drama... *puppy eyes* how about an epilogue??? pweeeeeeees

btw i never knew that about your name 7adi i loved the fact and na'9riti lil isim te'3ayerat ow im loving it more now 7asait sooo uniqueeeeeeeeeee...

im so over the roof that ur gonna start ur story im soooo sure its gonna be ecstatic cuz DUH ur writing it and its about you the one and only D...

i wish you would continue writing trapped cuz that story was just WOW i use to always read it from my mob and then again from my laptop...it seriously was soooooooooo sooooooooo interesting and so realistic, kafi inah elmain character semiti heheheh... amz7 amz7 bas min jid that story is my favorite too cuz its not something u read about all the time u know...

allah iwafgik 7abibti with whatever way you pursue in life because you deserve all the best...

a7ibich wayed ow sam7ini for not commenting in a while but i've been through a rough time lately bas a7een im back inshallah for good...

Anonymous said...

tttthhhaaaannnxxxx for the amazing storyyy sweetieee

ur the best..i knw i don't comment but i read all ur stories from the first day u started writing

can't wait for ur storyyy my talented writer =D

Be Your Passion said...

PLEASE POST aby el new Story!!!!!!!
Walaah eny ga3da an6er 3ala a7ar min Jamerr! ;D!!!!

BLBM:** said...

i loved this story oo inshalla the next ra7 itkoon a7la
oo i always thought that Mona would never change
thanx 4 the post oo waiting for the next;***
:D Big Smile

golden $tar said...

i'm such a big fan of safe happy endingz<<<3


aba my own 5aled*sigh*

love it wayeeeeed<3
bs pleaseeeeeeeeeee can u make an epilogue?!


can wait for the new one<3<3

EXCITING!!!!!!

Suzy.Q said...

Awwwwww :''')
you guys thank u so much for your wonderful comments and support. Wllah u made my day. I love each and every one of u and I hope these amazing comments from ALOT of u will continue :)